Title: Breath (1/10)
Pairing(s): Gary/Mark, Jason/Howard, Mark/Robbie, Gary/Robbie and various others. Mostly the first two.
Rating: Will be NC-17, but PG-13 for now.
Chapter Title: Emma And Robbie
Summary: Very AU. Set in the 19th century, how does the young, upper class, skeptic, gentleman, Gary Barlow, cope as he experiences the power of spirits firsthand?
Author’s Note: First ever (posted) Take That fic. It would be helpful if comments were constructive.
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- Current Location:Places.
- Current Mood: accomplished
- Current Music:Street Spirit(Fade Out) - Radiohead
I'm thinking that perhaps I should town it down to a PG-13, perhaps, then maybe it would find it's way onto that bloody Word Document, but considering the whole fic is centered around the sex, it'd be rather difficult...
Whilst I'm on the subject of Mock The Week slashiness, I do find that there is plenty of strange Russell/Mark interaction during the show, such as them finding the need to stroke each others' faces, prompting the Russell quotation: "Ooh. Your hands are soft." Mark's such a doll, isn't he?
I think the issue is that I am not all that experienced at writing slash. Reading, I know what's good, what's bollocks and what's absolutely awe inspiring, but I haven't the foggiest writing. It's a matter of guessing for feel really. I remember some initial Frerard that went rather badly right now...
So, I'm hoping I'll have the will power to write the porn soon and finish the bloody thing before it drives me round the bend. Plus, I should definitely write more Russell/Mark. My only issue here is... Who the hell is on top? They're both to passive and innocent!
- Current Mood: contemplative
See. Plot bunnies made me feel juvenille.
DAMON ALBARN, WHY ARE YOU SO GOD DAMN WRITEABLE?
- Current Mood: embarrassed
I saw my cousins today! (Well, Will and Susie anyway.) Will's up at Salford uni right now I think. He's going to be a pilot in the RAF. I hope he stays safe, none of that "friendly fire" malarky. Susie was wearing a tartan dress! A TARTAN DRESS! Fancy that... Anyway, I'm on a caffine high and I've got to do something to keep me occupied, so this is as good as anything. I mean, I can ramble on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on about almost nothing. I think that's enough of that though, so byes!
- Current Mood: hyper